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(02-22-2016, 01:45 AM)Davis Wrote: yeah but you offered me wishes out of your own will.


do whatever you think is right

I did offer you a wish but it's up to god to actually grant one or not.

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Davis
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(03-21-2016, 01:41 AM)Yato Wrote: I did offer you a wish but it's up to god to actually grant one or not.

thats ok then

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Rika
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As much as i like Naruto,  I wouldn't mind other characters...especially in a banner.

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Activate
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The typography is really bad, you should use a different font, font styles. The characters could be different since a lot of people dislike naruto and variety would do the banner justice. Another thing is you have to remember the rule of thirds when you're making tags like this (in this case banner), if you don't know the rule of thirds implies that the render(-s) should not be straight in the middle because the viewers eyes start wandering around.

 The smoke is much overused and it is the first thing that catches your attention
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Something like this should never be a tag. Adding less smoke effect or making seemingless with the whole picture would look much better.

I'm not sure what this is:
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But it simply does not fit there, removing it would look much better.

Again the smoke:
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On this side it is more spread out, but it still does not fit there. When making tags like this try to make the both sides seemingless with each other like mirrored copies because that will not only your tag look better, but it will keep the viewers eyes from wandering since it will be the same thing.

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If you are trying to make a smoke disintegration effect check up some tutorials and please uses brushes. One of the most important things with learning how to use Ps is learning how to properly utilize your brushes.

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If both of the sides were the same it would simply look better.

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What is this glow? It just does not fit at all, and frankly i am confused why it's there (unless it's part of the render).

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As i said before, the text here is very bad... The theme and color pallet for it does not at all fit the overall theme of your tag and it would look better without it. But since it is a banner one thing i would suggest is learning how to utilize all the text effects in Ps.

Overall simply watch/read tutorials and keep improving!

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(10-10-2016, 03:44 AM)Activate Wrote: [Only registered and activated users can see links Click here to register]
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yeah, you can kind of disregard this, i practiced and got slightly better 

check this thread out..

the stuff at the start is really bad, may wanna just like skip over to the more recent stuff.

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would like some feedback on the newer stuff i made .. ^_^

appreciate the detailed feedback

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Nel
Seriously good convo here.
I can't believe such details are even observed by normal people like us.

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God
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It's been so much time and almost an year and till now, it's still in progress. This is hilarious and just totally deserves a recognition.

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Ace
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(04-17-2018, 02:57 AM)God Wrote: It's been so much time and almost an year and till now, it's still in progress. This is hilarious and just totally deserves a recognition.

what theme are you using cause we're not using a banner atm

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SecretWish
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(04-17-2018, 04:04 AM)Ace Wrote: what theme are you using cause we're not using a banner atm

i am using delight light green theme and it has a banner in it with four characters. it looks lovely too

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God
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(04-17-2018, 04:04 AM)Ace Wrote: what theme are you using cause we're not using a banner atm


I am using one piece custom theme. I have been using it from the beginning and haven't changed it at all

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