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Shole Offline Rookie
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12-27-2014, 10:37 AM #1
How about sharing some of your poems , here is one of mine :

Beware of the dog

Written By Srdjan Solkotovic

Begging for love but the silence can’t reach us
A dog watching from the side of the street
Beware , beware of the dog it wants to eat your soul
Don’t look him in the eyes or your heart will melt like ice
No one is immune to the curse of that little fur ball
But if you don’t hear or see him at all its easier for you
Passing by like its got nothing to do with you
But it does and that’s why you can’t look him in the eyes
While you have food and a home , it is all alone
Beware the dog , the soul eating dog
His looks melt your heart , because it is turned into ice
Ice cold you don’t look right or left just in front
That’s why you can’t and don’t want to see this worlds cruelty.

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12-29-2014, 10:23 PM #2
That is remarkably good. I like it. Have you published these poems in a volume? Do you intend to be a published author?

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12-31-2014, 05:27 PM #3
I had an idea like this back in grade school when I did a lot of poems, I really like what you did with it.

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02-03-2015, 07:31 PM #4
Thanks both of you. Yes I will publish something soon enough Grin

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02-03-2015, 09:37 PM #5
That is a good poem.............

" Justice is subject to dispute; might is easily recognized and is not disputed. So we cannot give might to justice, because might has gainsaid justice, and has declared that it is she herself who is just. And thus, being unable to make what is just strong, we have made what is strong just."

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