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BeautifulAngel Offline Newbie
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02-05-2015, 12:35 PM #1
Follow Your Dreams

Close your eyes, open your mind, 
You will be surprised with what you find.
Let your ideas flow, 
Let your imagination grow.

Think of everything that you please,
Just relax and stay at ease.
What do you feel? What do you see? 
Imagination is key.

Let your mind wander off and roam, 
Does it feel like heaven? Does it feel like home? 
Don't be fooled or lose dignity ,
Make your dreams and hopes a reality.

Don't let anything get in the way of your dreams,
No matter how hard or how extreme. 
Remember your goals are achieveable,
And your dreams are conceivable.
Don't lose hope or be diluted of what you can accomplish or do, 
Because as Dolly Parton once said: "The only one stopping you from living your dream is you."

Composed by: Ashley Lapointe

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11-14-2015, 06:27 AM #2
Very nice! Thank you for sharing this with us. I loved how you were able to keep the rhyming without making it feel forced. it had a nice flow (the ending though seemed a bit long) but I enjoyed it none-the-less. I love reading inspirational poetry like this. Great work!

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11-19-2015, 03:27 PM #3
Ashley, this is beautifully written. In addition to that, it's very inspirational. I love reading stuff that inspires me in some way or another. I've always been quite the dreamer, you know this. Do you have any other writing that you can share? I'd be interested in reading some of your other stuff.


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